Remembering your own royal wedding – NaPoWriMo Day28

Doesn’t every bride feel like a princess in her wedding dress? If she doesn’t, maybe she needs to read How Not to Marry the Wrong Guy before it’s too late. William was careful, dating Kate for eight years, and the lovely young lady seems so poised in the spotlight and ready to take on the role of future queen. Who’s going to get up early to watch the wedding? Not me! (But I do want to see the dress.)

What do you remember most about your wedding day? Mine was hot! But it was the look on my about-to-be-husband’s face that melted me. I can still see it in the old photos.

Hope is reflected
In the faces of bride and groom
As they promise their futures,
Bound by golden rings
In forever circles of love.

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Capture proud parent moments with a scrapmoir – NaPoWriMo Day27

I’m usually proud of my kids, but sometimes I’m extra proud. Tonight my eighth-grade daughter put on a nice dress and pretty shoes (oh my gosh!) and walked across a stage to accept her Gold-N award for high grades throughout her middle school career. Yes, her daddy and I were proud, but most striking to me was seeing my child suddenly looking like a beautiful young lady ready for high school. Yikes! All the parents were snapping photos to document the moments of their own pride, and probably, like us, their astonishment at seeing how good their kid cleaned up.

What will you do with your special photos? Scrapbooking memoirist, Bettyann Schmidt, posts her ideas of saving pieces of life, not just photos, on the Women’s Memoirs website. Instead of making a sterile, wordless photo album or even scrapbooking with brief explanatory notes, she writes a little story besides the photos for a short, written remembrance of who is in the photo, or what happened and how she felt about it. I want to do this, especially for my kids. Read one of my favorite Bettyann scrapmoir posts and download her new, free Scrapmoir writing book at the Women’s Memoirs website. No, you don’t have to be a woman to do this; sensitive, thoughtful dads can make a scrapmoir, too – a simpler, manly version.

Look at her!
Skinny legs now shapely
Beneath a flowery frock
Showing off a figure
That looks brand new to me.

She tosses back long bangs
To look me in the eye
And I see the child’s face
Fading into the past,
An old photo in a new album.

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Lost in a book? Write a book proposal – NaPoWriMo Day26

I drove behind a lost person today. It was very annoying. She crept along the off ramp straddling two lanes, a line of cars backing up behind her. She paused between left and right, meandered left then flicked her turn signal on and off at several oncoming left turn options before finally choosing a strip mall lot to enter. Her behavior reminded me of the importance of doing book proposals – yes, it did.

One major benefit of completing a book proposal is determining the theme or focus of the book – what is the point, what is the message, where are you going. Say it in less than sixty seconds. Focus keeps us from meandering all over the place getting lost in the writing. Actually, when writing anything, whether business letter or school essay or memoir or media release, determining focus is important. Especially in today’s world of busyness and short attention spans, writing clearly along a path is necessary to keep most people reading in the first place. That and a good hook.

Lost in a crowd of words,
Picking and choosing the way,
Eyes on the star,
Find the pathway to truth
At the end of the day.

See Patricia Fry’s explanation of Synopsis

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