Questions for beta readers, your free author resource

The Korean War memoir I’ve been working on is almost ready for beta readers! What’s a beta reader? B is for beta, the B Team. Once you have self-edited your book, the next step is to find some volunteers to be your B Team – the test team to read your manuscript and tell you what they think so you can fix it up and get it ready for the A Team, which is your professional editor. You don’t want to waste money paying an editor to hack through a manuscript that needs a lot more work, and you need to make sure you will hit the mark with your targeted readers.

The ideal beta reader is someone who likes the genre you are writing and has read a lot of that genre. Hopefully, he or she is also good at spelling and grammar, but that’s not as important since your editor will cover that ground. Beta readers should also be unafraid to tell you what they think (nicely), but that depends on if they perceive you are open to the truth. Authors who have a thin skin will not learn how to make their writing better. Beta readers and editors should focus on how to help your book be better, not on babying your ego.

Actually, I have already given some chapters of this memoir to a couple friends who wanted to read them. One didn’t tell me until afterwards that she didn’t like reading about war! The other is used to reading NYT bestseller war books written by journalists, historians, or expensive ghostwriters, so had to shift his thinking a bit. I have one man’s down-to-earth personal stories of hell on the ground, no Hollywood sheen. Either way, I have already learned I need to get rid of some mission details that a fellow combat vet might like but would make the average reader’s eyes start to glaze. There’s a happy medium to be found, and fortunately my veteran friend is okay with me deleting more of the notes he so painstakingly wrote and rewrote. Not everyone’s ego is that accommodating to their ghostwriter/editor.

Authors should give their beta readers a set of instructions. How detailed those instructions are depends on if their betas are writers or are otherwise interested in spending time thinking about your writing. If you have someone willing to go indepth, here is a post from Joel Friedman’s blog called “Questions for your beta readers” by editor Jodie Renner. Most everyday (nonwriter) readers will likely do better not being overwhelmed by things to look for. I put a new page called Beta Readers in the Resources section of my blog. There you’ll find the “Short list of questions for your beta readers.


About moonbridgebooks

Co-author of Cherry Blossoms in Twilight, a WWII Japan memoir of her mother's childhood; author of Poems That Come to Mind, for caregivers of dementia patients; Co-author/Editor of Battlefield Doc, a medic's memoir of combat duty during the Korean War; life writing enthusiast; loves history and culture (especially Japan), poetry, and cats
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3 Responses to Questions for beta readers, your free author resource

  1. ML gomes says:

    I really like these question, especially the ones about what do they visualize.

  2. Mustang.Koji says:

    So you will be looking for volunteers hopefully with some knowledge of war?

  3. Yes, Koji-san! I have two Korean War Army combat vets in line to read. Anyone writing about history or cultural experiences should have someone else with similar experiences “vet” the book to help ensure those details are correct – you do not want to be dinged for mistakes that can make readers not trust the story. This is especially true when writing someone else’s story or if you are adding details to help explain. For Cherry Blossoms in Twilight, I had a couple beta readers who are Japanese who had also lived through WWII in Japan. Koji, you have so much intense research and first-hand stories behind your work that you probably don’t have to worry about this.

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